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Akeron
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Lyrics mos awesome that I kreated  
2007-09-03 04:44:22
 

I. In Holy War I Find Atonement (Of the Slaughtering of the Infidels)
Lyrics By: Peter N. Bucci
Music By: Peter N. Bucci
I.
I stand on the cliff sides of my home looking out across the seas
Far beyond the seven rune hills and across the endless ocean-there lies my destiny
All the ships of every nation prepare for war with the rushing of the winds and ten thousand oars
Across the blackest waters I will sail to make war with my ancient enemy

With holy steel held high in hand-the gods will favor me this day
Smash apart the enemy and devastate their lands
Burn down their halls-the earth gods shall be fat with blood this night
For in holy war I atone and the infidels I will slay

II.
In a mighty dream I saw my victory:
The enemy king lays dead at my feet
His armies have fled-his generals impaled on spears
The dawn is near-the rooster I hear
This is the day of the krieg
Siegreicher Marsch, my soldiers-to war we march this day
The time is now-raise your shields high

With holy steel held high in hand-the gods will favor me this day
Smash apart the enemy and devastate their lands
Burn down their halls-the earth gods shall be fat with blood this night
For in holy war I atone and the infidels I will slay

III.
The enemy fought well and slew many of my men-they dine with gods this night
Funeral pyres will illuminate the dark-honor the dead
The newly conquered will mourn their king this eve for I have filled them all with dread
I severed his body away from his head and left his heirs for dead
Yet honor the glorious slain we shall-regardless of their creed
For two kingdoms become one and songs shall sing of my deed

With holy steel held high in hand-the gods will favor me this day
Smash apart the enemy and devastate their lands
Burn down their halls-the earth gods shall be fat with blood this night
For in holy war I atone and the infidels I will slay


        

BattleKarma
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2007-09-03 05:47:08
 

Fucking right on, man. Great, great song. This is top notch writing( I should know because that's all I do).


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Akeron
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2007-09-03 05:49:11
 

Thank you. I was watching conan the barbarian and I was inspired.


        

Nocturnaz
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Posts: 197
  
2007-09-04 12:14:36
 

Akeron wrote:

Thank you. I was watching conan the barbarian and I was inspired.


*lol* I was actually thinking of Conan when I read those lyrics.

Nocturnaz


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Akeron
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Posts: 116
  
2007-09-04 02:04:52
 

I'm still having trouble putting music to it. I don't know if I should drag it out like the Sword does or speed it up for Amon Amarth or make it Dragon Force fast. If anyone comes up with some good sounding music to it, I will be eternally grateful.


        

Strident
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Posts: 454
  
2007-09-04 02:26:05
 

Wow dude, most epic! Very sword and badass indeed




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Ali
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Posts: 154
  
2007-09-04 03:25:35
 

Yeah i should add its probably more subtle and awesome than a lot of dragonforce's lyrics! At least they arent so horribly repetative and cheesy.
Dont get me wrong though, DF are my all tlme favourite band ever!
But yeah if you compare maiden's lyrics to the 'forces you can see theyre bith very sword but maidens are more awesome and subtle. Not blatantly cheesy.

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Akeron
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2007-09-04 11:15:33
 

Yup. D-Force's music tends to mention the words fire,flames,fields,cold,dark,winter,skies,and something about treason yet having no relation to the actual song. I believe their lyrics made more sense on Valley of the Damned. I really expect better from someone who was in Bal-Sagoth. Anyways, I try to do something different. This is the conan song for my band. Next up is the Snake Pliskin meets Mad Max at a party thrown by the Terminator and Voivod buys the beer and Kreator along with Celtic Frost brings the pizza.


        

Ali
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2007-09-05 02:31:24
 

Sounds most hugely amazing. I must hear some of your material when it's finished one day...
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WinterSteel
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Posts: 581
  
2007-09-05 03:21:18
 

Akeron wrote:

I really expect better from someone who was in Bal-Sagoth.


Does Dave contribute to the lyrics at all? I didn't think he did, but I could be wrong...

Also, I think Bal-Sagoth's a bit too much at times. I love the instrumental side, but unless I'm in the mood for epic tales, I find it really hard to get past the millions of monologues. It's kinda got the Gods of War effect. Then again... I've only got Starfire Burning Upon the Ice-Veiled Throne of Ultima Thule... are the later [/debut] album[s] an easier listen?


      

Akeron
Knight

Posts: 116
  
2007-09-05 05:52:39
 

a wee bit. cant promise nothing.


        

Dionysus
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Posts: 97
  
2007-09-08 06:15:41
 

Fuck nice lyrics.


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Akeron
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2007-09-08 06:50:51
 

many thanks.


        

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